DEEP INSIDE ME [E] Deep inside me there is an urge—to write. |
Hi Dr M C Gupta , This review is a part of "Game of Thrones" [13+]. Overall Impression: This is a poem about writing - why you write, and the satisfaction you receive from writing. It is a poem that I think many people can relate to. I know that I can. You speak of the constant urge to write, and the thrill that you receive from words. That is something I feel as well. Writing, at its best, is like a need. A need to pour one's thoughts and the feelings inside one's heart onto the page - or, in this modern day, onto the screen. You also speak of writing to near perfection. I am the same way. And how you welcome appreciation as well as criticism, which is a good thing. Criticism can be daunting, but also so very helpful! Writing is a way in which we can connect with people from around the world. A way to share a moment or two being of one mind. It's a beautiful art. You express this well. On the technical side of things, I like the rhythm and flow of your poem. And it's well-presented. Good job! Suggestions: I have no suggestions, dear author. You obviously know your poetry! I could find no errors, nor anything I felt you could improve upon. My Rating: As you can no doubt tell, I enjoyed this poem. I am glad that I got to read it. I had no suggestions. So, I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5. Thank you for sharing your work, and write on! Kit My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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