Hi Mage ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a very original idea, dear author. I would have never thought of combining Beethoven with Halloween!

I love how you use the sensation of sound and musical rhythm in your poem. Instantly recognisable, and I found that it works very well.

The legendary element, too, adds great imagery, and that combined with the spookiness of Halloween creates something quite unique. I have never read anything like it before and believe me, I have read a lot of poetry over the years!

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. I had no trouble catching on to the rhythm and flow of your item. It's nicely presented and easy to follow.

Suggestions:

I have just one tiny suggestion:

Line 11:

'tis rather than tis, perhaps?

Otherwise I could find no errors, and I spotted nothing that I thought could be improved upon.

My Rating:

As you can no doubt tell, I really enjoyed this poem. I am glad that I found it in your portfolio.

I had one minor suggestion, but it is indeed minor. Considering how much I liked your work, I will still give it a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .