Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I felt like I was part of ocean. The tides were starting to carry me. You use such vivid language that catches the spirit. Words like: smothering, hurl, voiceless, uncharted, unbound, etc. The word choice instantly engaged me.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I think anyone who doesn't love the sea might after reading this one. It's a beautiful symmetrical metaphor for the way we expand and grow in life.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

I felt my spirit become one with the white-capped crests and black counterpoint swallows. I soared to great heights and plummeted to greater depths only to be tethered to an enlightened sea. The purpose seems clear to me.


Glows:

The language is beautiful. The action is riveting. I feel this one a deep level and appreciate the artistry of words in this piece. Your sea is also the canvas of life.



Grows:

It was really hard for me to read, and not just because I've been staring at a screen for longer than I should have today. Some of the words were a little hard to make out because of the font style. We have some older eyes on here and I am not ready to admit defeat and get glasses. Although, some today are quite cute.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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