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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*NoteV* Story ~
Whoa! I am still reeling from this short story. I thought for sure I had figured out just who the voyeur was, and was shocked to learn I was wrong. This story has so much depth, sadness, passion, haunting. I can't even find the right words to describe it.
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*NoteG* Characters ~
The victim who watches everyone who makes an appearance and shares tidbits of their lives--he good, the bad, ugly and beautiful, oblivious that someone hears all that is said, sees all that they do.

*NoteV* Issues ~
Then she can take then next watch
This was the only thing I noticed that stood out.

*green**NoteG* Impressions ~
I was completely engrossed in this piece from the very first word to the last. My mouth even hung open once I realized who the narrator was. It was chilling to find out who she was. Watching the passionate encounter just before it all changed had me hanging on the edge of my seat, ready to go on that same ride. I could feel the breeze, picture the people, completely caught up in all that she was seeing and hearing. Lost to her sadness and then shocked when she knew what was coming next and hoped that her time watching would finally come to an end as the next victim met the same fate. Excellent story. So very real and filled with vivid imagery I won't soon forget. Thanks so much for sharing this one. Write on!
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