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Plot/story elements: Did I feel attached to the story or poem? Love this piece! It's so hopeful! I think if we can just discard fear, we're set free. Never miss a chance to be kind, is my favorite line. It's in the small day to day things like waving, using your turn signal, tipping the server 25%. I think those actions really add up. Eschewing the darkness and choosing the light! It's really hard to do that but such an important step to inner peace. Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else? Absolutely! It gives so much hope and a silver lining to people who may be shrouded in darkness and fog. I know life can be rough and it's easy to turn to hopelessness and doubt. It really is true, fear leads to anger and anger leads to the dark side. Be a Jedi! Was there a clear purpose to it? Yes, this piece is meant to uplift and give hope. It almost sounds like the adult Dr. Seuss, especially in the first line and the last. I love the play on verb tense. Glows: For me it's a poem of inner strength. It takes fortitude to stay certain in the face of doubt. I say acknowledge the doubt and fear and keep it at bay with powerful messages like these! Grows: Glad I looked for one I thought might paint a brighter picture! Miscellaneous Comments: ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy
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