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A review for Hose of GreyJoy
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Review of The Suit

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the House of GreyJoy in the Game of Thrones contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I have often wondered heaven would be like. I guess getting there and being there is the most important. This story of course tugs at the emotions of the heart.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A young man in an ill-fitting blue suit comes to this reception area asking to meet a Man and he doesn't know the person's name. That portion of the story did not make sense to me. If he is the son would he not know his father's name. The whole concept of a registration desk maned by an angel is unique.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I saw no errors that needed to be corrected.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing and sharing.

dblameck





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