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Review #4230495
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 Winter in Post Hole, Arizon  [18+]
Crack the Shutters
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review by Starling
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
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Title of Work: : Winter in Post Hole, Arizona
Author of Work: :Prosperous Snow (neva)
Date: : July 2, 2016

Plot:
Stella has been sent by her mother to visit her Great Aunt. The snow has gotten deep. The electricity has gone off and people are starting to arrive at the Aunts house

Scene/Setting:
Stella wants to go back to the Las Vegas, where there is a night life, her phones works and her computer will connect to the internet. She has been stuck visiting with her Great Aunt Lidia for over a month, after her mother sent her for a visit. When Stella wakes up from a nap, she finds the electricity has gone off, like her Great Aunt had said it would. People have also started to arrive for a party, like her Great Aunt said they would. We soon find out that one of the older gentlemen is actually a vampire, which Great Aunt Lidia prepares to take out of this world, if he decides to act on his inclinations.

Characters:
Stella Ambrose - visitor to Post Hole
Great Aunt Lidia Fightingbull
Sarah - neighbor arriving for party
Frederick Norris - vampire

Suggestions:
I liked this story. It is very subtly written. It gives the reader just enough information that they can come up with what could possibly happen as the party continues. We are led to believe not everyone knows Frederick is a vampire, which can make up wonder how or where he feeds. Post Hole is a very small town so I am thinking farms with cattle.

Character Count: 1,253 (tags = 222 Characters)
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