Hello!MsCaseyLuna

Here you compare our life with a movie. You are telling that we are the actor. Yes, . We’re the actor living in a movie. We all have our roles.

In our life there are so many ups and down both drama and comedy. Sometimes there may be scary scenes and sometimes drama or comedy. There are so many challenges in our life.

Our director is GOD, the one who orchestrate everything.


Suggestion: I think a little bit of editing will make this piece more interesting.

Overall I like the philosophical thought of your writing. I like the way you wrote all these.



These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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