Wow, I enjoyed the poetic-Bill, with his twists and turns and anticipation and never causing a disappointation! (My word,I made it up and I'm sticking with it.)
It reminded me of a Poe meets Stephen King, and lets his style cruise along within Poe's spirit, all melding of King and Poe and another guy we all know. Suddenly, taking the hand of Wilcox, controlling the hammering away at the keys, to what the muses of the past and the present day horror writers command.
In other words, I loved this poem.
The images were vivid, the end was totally cool. There were a couple wordy lines -- like holding ones breath for a second or two longer than the passing-out point, but it worked out in the long run, kind of long lines. However, I came away from it all tingling and everything.
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