Hello,

I thought this was pretty interesting! For initial thoughts on naming and basic continuity tips I thought it was really cool and it gave me some stuff to think over.

I think the one thing I would have really liked to have seen included were more examples of names that would and would not be appropriate in different scenarios. I also think that it would be cool to give examples from different genres instead of focusing primarily on fantasy - it would make the piece a little more well rounded and applicable.

I would really like to see this expanded on and the thoughts explained a bit more. There were a lot of questions I had while reading because you didn't go into much detail. For example, how should thriller names differ from romance names - especially with the presumption that they're both contemporary pieces? That's the sort of thing I would have liked to see you go into more detail about.

Although it wasn't quite the How-to guide I was expecting and not as versatile as I might have hoped, it was still an interesting read that made me reflect some on my character names.




-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .