Hey Wolfbane,

I thought this was so neat! I remember you talking about having an introductory poem, and it's so cool that I finally get to read it I thought it was awesome.

Because of the formatting limitations, I understand you not wanting to use this as your bio, but I still think it's neat that it's included so prominently on your port - it's cool to get to read a little bit about you, especially after talking to you for so long and enjoying so much of your work.

It was very stylistic, conversational, amusing, and I think it does a great job showing off not only your personality but your amazing poetry ability.

A couple quick things, the first is that I think the following line should be capitalized:

let me show to you the many creations that I have.


The other thing I noticed was that "Trying" and "It" are both capitalized in the middle of sentences. Is this a stylistic choice? I wasn't sure and some clarification would be neat.

Also, what does the "#50" at the bottom mean?

Other than those small little things, it was awesome. I think it really showcases what you do here - which is always great.

All the best,

-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .