Hey Wolfbane,

This one was definitely amusing. There is definitely something scary about being faced with something creepy when you're most vulnerable, such as in the bathroom (which is perhaps why so many Japanese ghost stories have bathroom settings.)

I didn't think this one was the best though. For one thing I wasn't sure if this was about a literal snake or some sort of snake creature (because the title implies it would be something a little scarier.)

I also thought some of the rhymes felt a little forced this time around (though still tons better than I could have done.)

It was definitely a fun read, but I'm looking forward to reading some more of you more serious work again. As always, keep up the amazing work!


-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .