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Rights Of The Past Open in new Window. [13+]
Nice guys finish last?
by w0lfbane Author Icon
Review by Cat Voleur Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am not a professional editor or critic. All the opinions in the following review are just that; opinions.


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Hey Wolfbane,

It's really nice to be reading some of your poetry again. I've really missed doing that these last couple weeks.

I thought this one was really great as well. You raised some good points and expressed your opinion eloquently and concisely while keeping the poetic structure parameters. Great job!

The one thing that I would call your attention to in this piece was the punctuation/capitalization. I'm not an expert on how form poetry should be punctuated, but it seemed like there were a few commas where periods should be, and your second line is the only line not capitalized.

Other than that, I thought it was great. I'm looking forward as always to reading some more of your poems shortly!




-Cat


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