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The Christmas Sweater Open in new Window. [E]
To Santa Claus, a message from A Disappointed Parent – a holiday in verse.
by BD Mitchell Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I have to admit, all through the poem I'm thinking, 'Go buy one and wrap it from Santa.' Sam will probably grow up to be a rich, multimillionaire. He can start a Christmas sweater company and design them.


I liked your poem, love how you left out the swear word! Great rhyming throughout. Consistent story line. Pulled me in and broke my heart or poor Sam! lol
Thanks so much for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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