Hello!Jacky

I just read your poem "Invalid Item" 
I like the delightful story of this poem. The story of this poem keeps me reading this poem from beginning to the end. The flow and the rhyming of your poem beautifully crafted with your words.
I like the lines

They all helped put right the office, and it was a nasty scene,
But in no time it was perfect, they worked smoothly as a team.
They all hugged her as she left, she didn’t quite understand why.
But they knew: It more fun working for cat in a bowtie.


All the characters of this poem nicely developed.

I think your poem are all wonderful. I enjoyed reading this one.


Happy Writing!

Mina  


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