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Hello, John, First welcome to WDC.

I just read this poem of yours from the review pages.

Initial Impression: The poem flowed wonderfully from beginning to end.

Theme and Creativity: This is lovely story inside every line.

Favorite lines : I like the lines

When your eyes are closed, and you’ve fallen asleep, Oldman Sandman – waving his lantern – will pick you up on his sleepy train to bring you to Dreamland.

I enjoyed reading your poem.

Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Mina


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