Hello Harry

I just read your poem from read and review page. I like the story of the poem. The flow of your poem nicely crafted into words. I liked the rhyme scheme you chose and the way the lines were arranged into stanzas, your descriptions and use of imagery are beautiful, I especially liked these lines:

We’d dump our haul on the neighbor’s lawn; he’d be impressed.”
“Granddad, will you take me frog hunting? We could go now.”
“Wyatt, all the toads have disappeared! Who’d have ever guessed
that the frogs would be gone. Things just aren’t the same somehow.”


A really wonderful picture was painted with your words.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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