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  |  | ME PRETTY IRISH LASS  [E] I need a host of fairies, with stardust on their wings.  |
| (5.0)  Hiya, Old Warrior! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you as a WDC  !   I so enjoy Irish themes and songs so I had fun reading your lyrical lines. It is wonderful and fanciful dedication rich in the imagery and lore of the Irish.  The rhyming couplets run smoothly with true rhymes and flowing words. Lovely soundscape. The bit of accent in words like "me Lasse" suggests the Irish tone.  I can here the brogue in my head. The syllable count is not even everywhere, but it did not detract from the read and it added variety to the drama.I notice you use a lot of commas in the middle of lines--- I wonder if this is on purpose to slow down the pace as some lines seem like they would naturally continue. eg> "show me, their secret..." I appreciate the romance and magic and the effort it took to weave this web. I'd like to dance with the fairies!  Thanks for sharing this lilting vision. Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **
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You responded to this review 06/04/2016 @ 11:46am EDT