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WEATHERED STONES Open in new Window. [E]
This place is full of broken dreams, and no one cares ... but me.
by Oldwarrior Author Icon
Review of WEATHERED STONES  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Tulipp*ITEM: Weathered Stones
*Tulipp*AUTHOR: Oldwarrior
*Tulipp*TYPE: poetry
*Flowerp*REVIEWED BY *Paw**Pawprints*LISA ANN NOE *Cat2*

*Flowerp*WELCOME: Hello oldwarrior,I am here with the power reviewers to read your item Today to give you a detailed review to help you become an excellent writer. "Beauty is in our words"...

*Flowerp*FIRST IMPRESSION: I am giving you this review because it is the 10th anniversary of the Angel Army and you are highlighted today. This is an outstanding and awesome poem, I can just imagine an old place where the dead lay beneath stones for eternity. I know of one and I visit from time to time I put a flower on every veterans grave or at least until I run out of flowers. My father lays in a grave and I decorate it with the American flag and many beautiful flowers every memorial day, he was a veteran who died at 44 years old. Also my uncles both died as infants so I decorate theirs as well. I think it is so important to honor the memory of those who die, by the bringing of flowers or flags or just a simple visit to a relative's grave would do.the following is my favorite part...

EXCERPT:

This place is full of broken tombs, and no one seems to see,
The shattered dreams, of many lives, and no one cares…

but me.


*Flowerp*SUGGESTIONS: there were no mistakes that I saw.

*Flowerp*CONCLUSION: This has been an endearing and special read for me, thank you for sharing, you keep writing and I'll keep reading. God bless you.
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