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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

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What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* You transport me back to the smells of my parents kitchen.

Since I am on a diet, I will have to settle for the memory, which is a vivid one thanks to your well chosen words.

Associating a food or a smell with a parent is very poignant to me.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I liked this part best:

"Smelling those pancakes
meant one thing to me
Daddy was home
where he should be."

It sounded like a happy time when all was well. I took my own Dad for granted because he was there. This makes me appreciate him all the more for his steady and constant presence in our lives.

Lovely poem!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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