The Cave Delicacy [13+] Contest Entry |
Greetings Angus ! A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? You sent me a nice review recently, so here I am to read and send you a review in my reading adventures. What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? You say the first red flag was the opening of the cave looking like a mouth. I think the first red flag was Alex getting new "friends" after getting a large inheritance. The second red flag was them sitting around his place. At least Alex didn't totally go in for everything. So, he does what he does. Not that bad. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? Why did they have the urge to eat anything in the cave. Then one followed the other. This is like monkey see, monkey do in behaviors. They sounded like they don't know what chicken tastes like really. Chicken tastes like nothing. Beefcake is delicious, but nothing ordinary ever tastes like beef, or so I'm told. Well, I like the outcome for Alex being gradual and not so severe. Now he needs to broaden his friend horizons. Creepy story - well told my friend! Well told! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I travel to many galaxies and pick my reading carefully, just as I pick my hay carefully. END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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