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| (4.5)   Greetings Happyfingers  !What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?  I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering! What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?   I think your story is a very clever and original take on the prompt. You have some ghostbusters type people who are in it for the money, consisting of mostly non believing sorts. They come to the job to make some money off of the scared inhabitants of the place.Everybody is nervous and when people are nervous about seeing an apparition, they aren't that believable. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?  I liked the humor of the pizza delivery triggering the actual event. There is irony in the disbelieving being the one to prove the existence of the ghostly spirit. There is denial right through it all, which is very human.Nice work on your story. Well done! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps  PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I travel to many galaxies and pick my reading carefully, just as I pick my hay carefully.  END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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