My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful. I also love the very first line as it made me think of that one famous story!

My Thoughts:
My what a lovely little piece, I love the way you tell your little story as you begin to paint a very clear picture! I really like how you weave your readers in and how your story is full of emotion.

My Favorite Parts:
I really enjoyed your whole piece from the beginning to the end. I love the emotion that is in this piece

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all. Keep up the good work.

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not all see, but feel as well.

My Rating:
Four and half stars

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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .