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 | The Paper Lay Waiting  [13+] Wrapping Christmas gifts in verse form.  |
| (5.0)| HI SANDRA! THE PAPER LAY WAITING is one of the fastest paced rhymes going on http:www.wwriting.com. When your story like poem tells us of two spent wrappers ... wrapping ... Your audience may take from this poetic endeavor ... Both the charm of Christmastide and perhaps audience association, especially @ "Each C-eve we struggle at this festive event to squelch our Yuletide misgivings that we over spent." Also, your line-up of materials for the presents presents much inside other holiday homes, reminding of holiday funtimes preparing gifts. Good title, which conveys that special syllable sound. OH, as contest judge let me again sjust say this aloud ... THE --- PAPER --- LAY --- WAITING Very well done! Enclosed gp incentive for poetry for accepted entries @ 2015s "Invalid Item" REV sent Cordially from TEFF With HAPPY ST. VALs 
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