Please, Give Me Strength [E] Healing from deep sorrow |
** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Thank you for sharing your work. I am reviewing on behalf of the WDC Power Reviewer's Group. Why I chose this work: First off, I want to wish you a Happy WdC Anniversary this month . I am also doing a Power Raid, and Mad Dash...so here goes: My thoughts on your writing: Death, especially a sudden death is nothing we are equipped to deal with, in my opinion. The despair, frustration and sadness are more than we can cope with on our own. I like how you call upon God's strength to not only cope, but to be able to get past the mind and heart numbing pain of loss and the grief. I'm curious about: Was it just the writing challenge with the word prompts that caused this poem to be formed, or was it a personal trial of sorts? It sounds very "heart-felt" to my thinking. Overall: A wonderfully written poem, about a very hard path that we all make when we are involved in the business of living. I enjoy your poetry, and derive a comfort in it. I appreciate your sharing this with me. sincerely, amyjo ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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