Thank you for sharing your work. I am reviewing on behalf of the WDC Power Reviewer's Group. I am also entering this review for the Mad Dash Contest.

Why I chose this work: While trading love for beauty isn't a unique idea, the different ways that writers use it to voice their thoughts can be unique. I wanted to see how you give voice to this type of trade-off.

My thoughts on your writing:It sounds like she traded something eternal for something temporary. I get the feeling that she should have read the "fine print" before accepting such a bargin.

I'm curious about: Where did you get your inspiration for such a sad poem. Such temporary gifts seem to be a high price for sacrificing one's heart and the joy and pleasure that it brings.

Overall: A chilling and provocative piece. A warning as well, not to just take things at face value. You will never understand the price that you may be required to pay for such actions. Thanks again for sharing your poetry, and allowing me to review it.

sincerely,

amyjo

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