Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review your work.

My first impression: I enjoy poetry, and especially acrostics. For some reason they appeal to me - I guess being able to sum up the word in poetic form . Happy WdC Anniversary!

Other thoughts: Halloween evokes scariness, even if we usually end up scaring ourselves. I also like the way you've made the acrostic rhyme - a nice touch to your poetry form.

My favorite parts: The last two lines...I would scream and run like crazy to see a ghost. I am reminded of the scary forest scene in The Wizard of Oz...lions and tigers and bears: Oh my!

Some suggestions: Take it for what it is worth...I might have used the word within rather than of in the first line...but other than that nothing to offer in ways of improvement. You set out to set a creepy, scary tone, and you nailed it.

Overall: A very appropriate Halloween poem. Spooky and scary, but nothing gory (which is appreciated, by the way! LOL). I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future


sincerely,

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