Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review your work.

My first impression: The seven deadly sins...that is quite the topic for your poem. I will want to read the companion piece Virtue afterward to see the similarities and differences in your styles.

Other thoughts: You've labeled these sins and their consequences with great style. While this is a free-form poem, the rhythm and rhyme flows smoothly and has a nice bouncy feel to it.

My favorite parts: I am having a hard time choosing a favorite part or verse. Each could stand on its own with it's own warning. You've done a great job throughout the entire poem.

Some suggestions: No typos or grammar issues that I found. I really couldn't offer any suggestions, other than I am surprised that this doesn't have an award attached to it.

Overall: Wonderful wording. Smooth flow. Excellent descriptions and heedful warnings. I enjoyed reading your poem, and will look at your companion piece as well. Happy WDC Anniversary this month, too!


sincerely,

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