Hello, Andy~hating university
Thank you for sharing your work.

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I am reviewing your writing because: Even though it is past the Christmas season, it is still my favorite time of the year. I enjoy reading poetry, so this was a win/win for me.

The tone you've set: It is a very Courier and Ives feeling that you've taken with the poem. It also has a bit of fun with the "booze-less" pudding. That brought a smile to my face as well as a chuckle.

How I feel about your work: You were very thorough in laying out what you were trying to accomplish - the meter and the flow. You also showed where you placed in the contest (I would have given you first place, just from what I read of your work ). You also showed where it was featured in a newsletter, and offered an e-rated version for the littlest poetry contest. This was well thought out and executed.

I wonder about: What inspired you to write this poem? Was it the challenge of the style? Are you a fan of Christmas? Just wondering...but that information interests me.

Suggestions I have: I have no suggestions to give. You've done a remarkable job here. No typos or grammar issues. The meter was done well.

Overall: I loved your poem. The style, the fun you seemed to have with it, and all of the information you gave as footnotes. 5 stars and two thumbs up for sure!

sincerely,

amyjo

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