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 | The Doomed Schoolbus  [13+] Nine school students meet their fate on Halloween Eve.  |
| (5.0)| NOV 19. 2015 REV sent for:
THE DOOMED SCHOOLBUS, set in Kentucky is one of the most surprising takes on shape-shifting ever encountered on http:www.writing.com. As a 2015 submission, this five star work bills also @
IN SUM --- "When nine high school students are stranded inside a "dadblasted" motor-on-the-fritz bus .. youthful thoughts turn to missing trick-or-treat night. When a werewolf climbs onto the bus with an eerie agenda toward animal abuse revenge ... well, Kids (readers) ... best batten down the hatches before distraught parents remain hopeless by story end. BRAVO! Good luck in the contest." April Sunday Enclosed 2000GP for entering in 2015. This is also the kind of tale which can be taken a lot further inside the realm of fine literature. Imaging now possible detail quirks for the costumed lad, the deer with a watch, etc, etc. Yes, another submission that is memorable.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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