Hi: I am reviewing this for The 13 Days Of Halloween Writing Challenge. Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, opinions and my suggestions. Feel free to take what you benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.

My Thoughts: These words are eerie, attention getting and say Halloween.

My Favorite parts: I like the first lines about taunting, dancing and prancing. The first stanza invites you in.

My Editing Comments: I wasn't sure what this is about. If someone is being chased by a vampire, ghost or just an evil person.

My Suggestions: At the end, let us know what or who was troubling the main person in the poem. Dark and creative otherwise.

Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan