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Review of Howl o' ween  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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OCTOBER 15, 2015

Hello, Blue Moon (nice user name) and thanx for entering "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.

Enclosed find your handy, treat of 2,000 GP.

Of: HOWL-0-WEEN

Much of the trick or treat theme seems covered here.
I like how you note a few punts at the big sis, the first person narrator.

I also laughed @ the Beet's mother being a "vegan."

A few points.

Down the street repeats too close together.
typo @ t Meaning at the last moment
5 houses --- should always be spelled out to five houses.

And, certainly --- HAPPY HALLOWEEN

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