\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4154728
Review #4154728
Viewing a review of:
 ASKING GOD Open in new Window. [ASR]
Perhaps I am - asking God - for the wrong things
by COUNTRYMOM-JUST REMEMBER ME Author Icon
Review of ASKING GOD  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
*Flower4* Hi Countrymom! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem!*Smile* *Flower4*


*Reading*MY INITIAL THOUGHTS*Reading*

I really enjoyed this poem. It spoke to me of immense faith. *Heart*

● Character(s):

Your characters, being you and God, are perfect. It is how it should be: you and He alone in conversation.

● Storyline/Plot:

The storyline for this poem is simple and concise. You are a person who puts strong faith in God and that He will answer you when you call.

I am of the same faith - perhaps not denomination, but most definitely a firm and absolute believer in Almighty God, and the power that He commands. I pray each day, and He never fails me. It may not come to fruition exactly when I want it to, and it may not turn out the way I ask Him to make it, but one thing is for sure - HE knows what is best, whether we understand His reasons or not.

● Dialogue:

There is no dialogue in this poem, but there is an inferred conversation between you and God, and that dialogue is beautiful.



*Heart* MY FAVORITE PART(S):*Heart*

"I am sure
He hears me.
The blessings come
When I am quiet
And learn His will,
When I listen
To His answers
For He gives me
Everything I need
Each day;
One day at a time.
I will learn
To give thanks
Instead of
Forever
Asking God." This is so wise, I just cannot tell you! I always say this exact thing - "If we never stop to thank God for the prayers He DOES answer, why should we expect Him to answer more of them?"

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: *Idea*

None that I could find. Perfect spelling, punctuation and grammar. Great job! *Badge*



*Vine1*IN CLOSING: *Vine2*

Thanks again for sharing this powerful, spiritual poem. I'm sure your readers will love it as much as I do. *Heart*

I think you're an excellent writer, and I hope to read more from you soon. Keep up the good work, & Keep Writing! *Pencil*


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 09/12/2015 @ 1:28am EDT
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4154728