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Given: Sep 8, 2015 at 11:44am
Length: 604 Characters |
604 w/o WritingML
My favourite stanzas are the first and third. I felt a connection to this poem as I am currently dealing with a 'stranger' I have known for many, many years. These two verses resonate with me.
I think 'specially' needs an 'e' at the beginning. I had to laugh at the cap - it almost seems like you forgot about that word and had to work it in... it works. It just caught me off balance... probably because that last verse is so short.
I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing it and I wish you well on your month long poetry journey. I am taking the challenge of the Construct Cup as well.
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