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Review #4154306
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Quilting the Poems Open in new Window. [18+]
A journal to keep track of my poetic thoughts.
by LostGhost: Seeking & Learning Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Growing into strangersOpen in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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My favourite stanzas are the first and third. I felt a connection to this poem as I am currently dealing with a 'stranger' I have known for many, many years. These two verses resonate with me.
I think 'specially' needs an 'e' at the beginning. I had to laugh at the cap - it almost seems like you forgot about that word and had to work it in... it works. It just caught me off balance... probably because that last verse is so short.
I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing it and I wish you well on your month long poetry journey. I am taking the challenge of the Construct Cup as well.

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