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| (4.5)| Hello Sarah Anne Bryant  . I am Elizabeth. Welcome to Writing.com! I found you listed under the "Noticing Newbies" page and decided to take a peek at your porfolio.This review is brought to you by "Black Magic Birthday Bash Logo" .Overall Impression I love short poems and this is no exception. I enjoyed reading it. As I did, I could feel the depression the writer felt. I love it when a writer can draw me intp their piece. Believe me, that is a good thing. However, I do have a couple of suggestions for you. Suggestions Suggestion 1: Break this poem up into stanzas. This will make it easier to read. Hit "Enter" a couple of times after each stanza for proper spacing. Feel free to peruse my portfolio to get ideas about spacing stanzas. Suggestion 2: Or, you could use punctuation throughout the poem for easier readability. If you would like me to illustrate what I am talking about, feel free to email me. Rating   Other Great job and Write on! I look forward to reading more of your work.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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