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Sharpened Claws… Open in new Window. [E]
What are we teaching our children?
by Robin:TheRhymeMaven Author Icon
Review by Grateful Jess Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello and good evening. I'm Grateful Jess Author Icon and I will be reviewing Sharpened Claws.... Please remember that these are only my thoughts and opinions; please use whichever you find the most helpful.

Overall Thoughts:
This was an interesting poem.I really liked the rhythm and flow because it worked with the imagery. The imagery had a dark twist to it, but with religious symbolism. I think this is another interesting way to look at abuse.

I would recommend proofreading this. Although it doesn't look like there are any mechanical errors, I always suggest going back to proofread to make sure you're conveying all you want to convey.

Rating:
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Final Thoughts:
Keep writing! ~Jessica

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