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The Pill Open in new Window. [18+]
Don't Swallow the Pill!
by Fran 🌈🧜‍♀️ Author Icon
Review of The Pill  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I came here because the title definitely intrigued me. I was expecting a dark piece about drugs and addiction, and maybe even suicide.

I did not see that ending coming. After all the warnings, I was expecting a dramatic ending and when I saw that the lines were starting to get shorter I thought that the person swallowed the pill and died. But this is a whole lot better. It's like: "I give up, do it.. Just swallow it already." Hahah *BigSmile* I love that! I mean there are only so many warnings you could issue to a person. Beyond that point they should be on their own, lol.

I also quite enjoyed the repetition of the last line of the first three verses: "You may just die." It made for an interesting rhyme and it made the last line in the poem even more hilarious, "Swallow the Pill!"

I quite enjoyed this.

Thanks for a funny read!




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