Good morning Charlie ~ and good morning. I'll be reviewing Life By Comparison. Please remember that these are only my opinions; please feel free to use my suggestions.

First Impressions:
I really like the message behind this poem, Charlie. I think we all try to compare ourselves to others, although we shouldn't because we're unique in our own ways. Life By Comparison shows the readers that those who mock or tease are insecure themselves and hope that no one will blow their facade.

Overall Thoughts:
I really like the rhythm and flow of this poem. I like the free verse rhythm of Life By Comparison because AABB rhyme doesn't take away from the message. The diction you chose for Life By Comparison works with the message. The only suggestion I have is to go back and re-read it to make sure you're conveying all you want to convey.

Rating:
***

Final Thoughts:
Keep up the good work Charlie and write on! ~Jessica

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .