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Hi xrockachicx! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

I found your poem in the short poems written by members of WDC and I wanted to have a look at your poem because of the intriguing title. I like reading poems about colours and things like these because it gives an insight to the writer's mind and how he is like. Same is here, when I read the title, I had all kinds of questions in my mind as to what kind of red is the poet talking about, is it being used literally or metaphorically, how will the poet relate red with things etc. You gave a wide variety of things that were read in colour, both literally, and in symbols as in you relate evil to the colour red as well as to the emotion of anger. I love the last line of your poem where you say that red is present in all of us. None of us can deny that we don't fee angry or passionate. The first one of your poem was very obvious as well as a relevant example because it is in everyone, no one can exist without blood. The thing that made me laugh in your poem was the red eyes in a bad photograph! I saw an old album of my family and there were very few photos in which people's eyes were red, liek a vampire, in the night when the flash went on! *Laugh* The flow was good as well as the choice of vocabulary used which was simple but served your purpose in the poem.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Write On!
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