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We   [E]
A little something I dusted off to share.
by Mad Madam Mim
Review of We  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Mad Madam Mim ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

I found your poem in the shortest poems on WDC And the title and the choice of genres really captured my attention. The title 'We' gives so many different kinds of ideas about what the poem may be about and in what context it is used. When I saw the genres in which this poem was written, I couldn't help but come and read how you have used it to put in those genres. The first few lines are very interesting because they capture the reader's interest then and there and keeps the reader engaged throughout the poem. It was very mysterious and made me think deeply of the poem. I have never read a similar poem, being written as a shadow of the night, as a ghost. I liked how you showed the activity of creatures like you when all the light goes out and there is nothing but complete darkness. The flow of your poem is good, the vocabulary you have used in simple yet very effective in submitting and conveying your emotions to the reader, well done! Although this is a short poem, I really like it! My favourite lines were the

To find our kin
We are the shadows
We are the night
Come play with us

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Write On!
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