Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 08-05-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A well developed and put together story.
A sad occasion to be sure, but one that in the end became a cause of celebrating Kyra's birthday.
The emotions in this piece were genuine and the reader could identify easily with the sadness and other emotions as well.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and grammatically snafu free.
Nary a suggestion for improvement in needed this day.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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