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Given: Aug 7, 2015 at 11:59am
Length: 549 Characters |
535 w/o WritingML
Your St. Patricks day piece,
is located in Spiritual Newsletter 8-5/
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
The mystery of how his hair got green is not explained.
The calamity that ensued was entertaining and riveting. The reader could feel the happiness, anger, frustration, and eventually fun to be had. Well done!
Form and structure are solid.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically speaking, nary a jot nor tittle are awry.
Write on!
Copenator out!
founder of Copenator's Crew
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