My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.

My Thoughts:
I really like the title and the description and they both also made me curious and as I came on in I found a very well thought out, clever, full of emotion, very creative story. You have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.

My Favorite Parts:
Truth is, I really enjoyed your whole story from the beginning to the very end, I like the way it all unfolds and I like the journey that your story is taking me on.

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.

My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most all keep writing. Love the creativity keep bringing it!

My Rating:
Five Stars


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