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A Pot of Gold (or 'Yellow'?)  [13+]
You may not look at a 'Pot of Gold' the same after this limerick!
by Cubboo!
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

*Paw*TITLE: The title is amazing right along with the poem! You foreshadow wonderfully what the piece will be about.

*Paw* THEME: The joy and fun of St Patrick's Day combined with a bit of overindulgence and elimination.

*Paw* TONE: The tone is humorous and you maintain it right through the whole piece! Great Job!

*Paw* PACE: You have mastered a very fast pace within the poem, your word choice is spot on.

*Paw* FLOW/RHYTHM/METER: Your poem is wonderful because of your pace and rhythm within the piece. The use of a Limerick for a St Paddy's Day poem...ingenious!

*Paw* FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE: Your allusion to 'pee' in your poem is great, you play with the wording with out being vulgar.

*Paw* EXCELLENT WRITING EXAMPLES:
My favorite lines were...
he potty looked old
But I filled it with gold…
There’s nothing like spreading the cheer!

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