A Pot of Gold (or 'Yellow'?) [13+] You may not look at a 'Pot of Gold' the same after this limerick! |
Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group! TITLE: The title is amazing right along with the poem! You foreshadow wonderfully what the piece will be about. THEME: The joy and fun of St Patrick's Day combined with a bit of overindulgence and elimination. TONE: The tone is humorous and you maintain it right through the whole piece! Great Job! PACE: You have mastered a very fast pace within the poem, your word choice is spot on. FLOW/RHYTHM/METER: Your poem is wonderful because of your pace and rhythm within the piece. The use of a Limerick for a St Paddy's Day poem...ingenious! FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE: Your allusion to 'pee' in your poem is great, you play with the wording with out being vulgar. EXCELLENT WRITING EXAMPLES: My favorite lines were... he potty looked old But I filled it with gold… There’s nothing like spreading the cheer! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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