Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

TITLE: The title is amazing right along with the poem! You foreshadow wonderfully what the piece will be about.

THEME: The joy and fun of St Patrick's Day combined with a bit of overindulgence and elimination.

TONE: The tone is humorous and you maintain it right through the whole piece! Great Job!

PACE: You have mastered a very fast pace within the poem, your word choice is spot on.

FLOW/RHYTHM/METER: Your poem is wonderful because of your pace and rhythm within the piece. The use of a Limerick for a St Paddy's Day poem...ingenious!

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE: Your allusion to 'pee' in your poem is great, you play with the wording with out being vulgar.

EXCELLENT WRITING EXAMPLES:
My favorite lines were...
he potty looked old
But I filled it with gold…
There’s nothing like spreading the cheer!

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