Hi David.

It looks like I will be your reviewer for this final piece for the Winter I Write contest.

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was a well written flash fiction piece. I like how you were able to fit the back story in with so few words. There are a few things you could add, more emotion in your protagonist. I know she cries, but does the ghost of her friend also send chills? Does she cry from guilt and remorse or is there some other reason? Why did she come back there?

Flash fiction is difficult in that it forces us to choose our words very carefully, but it's also quite helpful in the same way. I like what you have done with this piece, and though I would have liked more details, I think you have done a great job at telling a story.

Thank you for sharing this!
Keep writing!

Brandy

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .