Review number # 2 of week Jan 22-28th

Hi Jess, yes I am still here.

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Ode to A Troubled Mind

First Impression: We think more alike than I think Jess knows.

What I liked: The first stanza felt like you were inside my mind.

What needs your attention: Nothing, You are very talented young woman.

Favorite Parts: I write because of you. That's exactly why I write, I am not really seeking publication, just freedom from the darkness that haunts my mind at all hours.

Overall Impression: Write on Jess, this is another exceptionally well written poem. The words are powerful and carry the image of suffering through the first stanza and the second stanza confirms the authors ability to make the best of the situation.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .