Review number # 1 of week Jan. 22-28th

Hi Jess,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Night and Day

First Impression: Beautiful imagery!

What I liked: He sprinkles stars-a fine display. I love the visual image you chose to celebrate her grace.

What needs your attention: Nothing, Jess

Favorite Parts: At dawn they briefly coalesce but all too soon, with much distress. I know the poem is about night and day but all I could visualize were lovers parting and my sentimental side was sad.

Overall Impression: Excellent creativity and style demonstrated from the beginning to the end. I feel this poem is exceptionally well written! You are a very talented poetess!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .