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Given: Jan 27, 2015 at 7:05am
Length: 611 Characters |
598 w/o WritingML
Spiritual Newsletter 1-21-15,
displays your beautiful piece.
God bless you for being a nurse.
Your work comes with a price.
Your story is a part of real life and the reader feels the emotion you fill this memorial with.
The reader feels sadness indeed, and in the end he/she feels the sense of release as the child no longer suffers.
Form and structure are well suited.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and emotionally filled with just the right amounts to keep the reader glued to his/her seat.
Grammatically speaking you are free of visible infractions.
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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