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Given: Jan 24, 2015 at 3:24pm
Length: 660 Characters |
614 w/o WritingML
Hi Ken,
This is a really good story with a fantastic twist. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.
I was surprised when Rose saw the knife but wasn't scared. At that time I thought that such a woman was probably through worse. But when she moved at an unusual speed, you revealed that she was something supernatural.
I love the idea of death being a woman. I've always written of it as a man . The part of taking his soul through his lips was really good.
I think the story should be rated 18+ because at first I thought Rose was prostitute.
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