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Given: Jan 22, 2015 at 7:42am
Length: 679 Characters |
643 w/o WritingML
Hello there,
I found this story in one of the contest forums. This is what I thought about it:
Title: The title reminded me of Beauty and the beast. The story is also somewhat like that.
Language/Layout : Interesting Language here. I know this is English, but is it a specific dialect or something? Just curious, as English is not my first language.
Perfect, neatly laid out story. It has a smooth flow, and I was glued to it till the end. You might try to add a relevant header image to make it look better.
What I liked : The transformation of the beast back into a human.
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